eldeibit
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| 2021-02-17 07:18:14 |
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Working on a sci fi level. Comments are appreciated. Thanks !
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Robo
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| 2021-02-17 12:27:51 |
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looking ok.
Maybe try have more contrast between lighter and darker areas, see if you can get the water color different to everything else otherwise maybe change the roof color to white ?
See if adding normal maps gives more detail and perhaps have a variation in the color between the platform orange and the column orange color.
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csp-games
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| 2021-02-17 21:17:12 |
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I like it,Looks like made in Blender :) they always have those bright scenes. Like Robo said, lower the ambient light. so theoretically unlit areas get really dark. But that is a matter of preference, so... it's up to you. Reflection on water is a bit harsh, this could be mercury, the way it reflects, probably caused by the same color above and below it.
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eldeibit
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| 2021-02-18 16:12:08 |
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Thanks guys you are the best! I will reform and return.
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veganpete
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| 2021-02-19 08:20:28 |
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Personally I would change the colour of the water (maybe a toxic green/yellow - or just make the water a bit darker than it is now).
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just_in_case
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| 2021-02-19 15:55:33 |
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The level looks good. as others have already mentioned it looks a bit overlit. And as others are mentioning about water. I think even though if you change the water color it will still look like some sort of molten metal or Lava you can play with the wave height or wavelength and flow speed to make it less dense and natural.
One more thing is with the Light in your scene i can see some sort of volume(rays) coming through the light models as white transparent texture. You can create fake volumetric light there using particles and plane mesh or billboards otherwise in the final game it might look a bit odd to some player.
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csp-games
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| 2021-02-19 21:50:25 |
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I did like those ray meshes but would scale them up and lower the transparency, set them to additional blendmode, combined with a darker background.
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eldeibit
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| 2021-02-21 11:05:32 |
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thanks guys you are the best !! I will follow all the advice and come back!
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canga
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| 2021-03-22 07:48:44 |
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Hi guys how are you I hope you are all fine :) How am I going to turn the packages I uploaded into an item? If you answer, I would appreciate it. Have a nice day.
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